Question

【题目】书面表达：

（15分）某中学进行了一次学生健康状况调查问卷活动，调查发现学生的健康状况如下：

1.饮食结构不合理；

2.体育锻炼不足；

3.心理压力大；

针对现状，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，说明如何保持身体健康。

要求：

1. 语句通顺、语意连贯；

2. 包含提示中提到的所有信息；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数 ；

4. 不能出现真实的姓名、学校等；

5. 不少于80词。

How to stay healthy is a big problem for us. Here is some of my advice.

Answer 1

【答案】

How to stay healthy is a big problem for us. Here is some of my advice. As we all know，health is very important．But how to keep fit? Firstly， we should have a good diet．That’s eating more fresh fruit and vegetables， but less junk food. Drink more water instead of coke or other unhealthy drinks. Secondly， it's good for us to take more exercise， such as running， walking， ball games and so on. At last， we should learn to relax ourselves. We can listen to some light music， chat with families or friends and have a good sleep. To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章主要介绍了某中学进行了一次学生健康状况调查问卷活动，发现学生的健康状况。注意时态和征求建议的语气。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，介绍了学生们的饮食不合理，及他们的体育锻炼不足，他们压力大.，这些句子it's good for us to take more exercise， such as running， walking， ball games and so on；we should learn to relax ourselves给文章增色不少。