Question

12．中学生既有繁重的学习任务，也丰富多彩的校园生活．作为中学生的一员，谈你学习之余所喜爱的活动．
1、写作要点：
1）体育、音乐或某类兴趣小组；
2）为什么喜欢这类活动，怎样参加这类活动；
3）将来有什么样的理想．
2、写作要求：
1）短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使短文意思连贯；
2）短文用词在90个左右．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．他们给我们许多我们不能在学校学到的知识．that we can't learn at school是一个定语从句，修饰先行词knowledge．
高分句型二
I find it's a good way to relax myself．我发现这是一个放松自己的好方法．这是一个宾语从句，I find是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my school life is still colorful．【开篇点明主题】After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】．So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．I find it's a good way to relax myself【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends  I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．【正文部分详细介绍课余生活】
 I will be a  teacher when I grow up，I will try my best to help my students and play sports with them after class．【结尾部分讲述将来的打算】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．