Question

【题目】书面表达

你收到你美国朋友Jack的来信，要你也介绍有关你的学校学习和生活的情况．请你根据以下信息，简单介绍你的学校学习和生活情况．字数在80字左右．(已写出的句子，不计算在内)可根据自己情况，适当增加内容．但文中不能出现真名．

学 习	1．每天7：00a．m骑自行车上学，7：30a，m开始上课，7:45做早操。 2．非常喜欢英语，擅长于画画。 3．(根据自己情况写至少一句有关你学习方面的句子)
生 活	1．早餐在家吃一些面包、鸡蛋，午餐在学校吃。 2．放学后，有时去学校附近的超市买学习用品(school things)。 3. 在学校有很多朋友。

Dear Jack．

I’m happy to get your letter to know about your study and life at school．

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Yours sincerely

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack．

I’m happy to get your letter to know about your study and life at school．

Do you want to know about my school life? Well, I get up early and have some bread, eggs for breakfast at home .Then I go to school by bike at 7:00 every day. Our classes begin at 7:30a.m. We usually do morning exercises at 7:45 a.m. There are four classes in the morning .At 12:00 we have lunch at school. We have two classes in the afternoon. English and P.E. are my favorite subjects, because they are interesting. And I am good at drawing. But I don't like math, because it's too hard. I have many friends in school. I often play basketball or play chess after class. Sometimes we go to the supermarket to buy school things near school.

Yours sincerely

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and以及频度副词，还使用了含原因状语从句的主从复合句，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。