Question

【题目】假如你有一个外国笔友，你准备向他介绍你最好的朋友— 李阳。李阳是个很聪明的学生，住在南京, 但他有一些不好的习惯。请你根据下面表格提供的信息，用英文写一篇短文，并针对他存在的一些问题提出合理的建议。

Name	Li Yang
Class	Class 10, Grade 7
Looks	big eyes、short and fat，glasses
Likes	play computer games; watch TV; hamburgers; cola
Dislikes	swim; run; vegetables
Suggestions	◆…… ◆……

具体要求：1）不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整;
3）内容必须包括上表中的要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
Li Yang is my best friend.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Lang Yang is my best friend. He is a clever student. He lives in Dafeng. He is in Class Ten , Grade Seven. He is short and fat. He has big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.

He likes playing computer games and watching TV, he watches TV for three hours every day. he likes having hamburgers and coke.

He doesn't like swimming or running, he doesn't love eating vegetables.

I think he should do more exercise and eat more vegetables. He must stop playing computer games. If he does this, he will be healthier!

【解析】本篇书面表达要求写一篇人物介绍的文章，主人公是李阳：李阳是个很聪明的学生，住在南京, 但他有一些不好的习惯。首先，要认真审题，掌握来信中的信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。结合表格中的以下要点：姓名，班级，外貌，喜好，喜恶，以及作者对他的建议，可以适当发挥，补充细节。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。