Question

假设你叫陈军，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他要到无锡来旅游。他想先了解无锡的情况。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍无锡的吃、住、游、购等情况。

要点提示：

“吃”在无锡	无锡有大量的餐馆，你可以品尝许多本地美食。
“住”在无锡	无锡有许多宾馆，很干净也很漂亮。
“游”在无锡	无锡有许多著名的景点，比如蠡湖（Li Lake），离市中心不远，你可以玩得很开心。
“购”在无锡	无锡有很多大商场，可以为你的家人买礼物。
其他方面	……

注意：1. 邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

2. 省略部分须用1-2句话作适当发挥；

3. 词数70字左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to Wuxi.

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Hope to see you soon in Wuxi.

Yours

Chen Jun

 

Answer 1

Dear David,

I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to Wuxi. There are plenty of restaurants in Wuxi. You can try some local food here. You can live in different hotels. They are clean and beautiful. There are lots of famous places to visit, like Li Lake. It is not far away from the city center. You can have a good time there. There are also many big shopping malls and you can buy some presents for your family. It’s a good place to visit.

Hope to see you soon in Wuxi.

Yours

Chen Jun (74字)

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封信的格式，是在得知自己的笔友David要来无锡旅游，写信告诉他无锡的情况，介绍无锡的情况一般应该用一般现在时，但是因为朋友是还没来，所以他来后会是怎样的，要根据情况用一般将来时，要注意句子的主语变化及主谓一致。

【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to Wuxi. There are also many big shopping malls and you can buy some presents for your family. It’s a good place to visit. 提醒学生注意恰当地使用过渡词，以使行文连贯。

考点：提纲作文。