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假设你叫李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。

注意:1.回信需要包括全部要点;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

3.字数60左右。

Dear Linda,

  I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic GamesI know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help

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  Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China

Yours,

Li Hua

答案:
解析:

  一、评分原则:

  1.本题总分为20分,按5个档次给分。

  2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

  3.词数少于40,从总分中减去1分。

  4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

  5.拼写与标点符号是准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

  6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

  二、内容要点:

  1.上课记笔记

  2.大胆开口

  3.多听多读

  4.自拟建议1

  5.自拟建议2

  三、各档次给分范围和要求:

  第五档(1720)

  完成了试题规定的任务。

  覆盖所有内容要点。

  应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

  语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。

  有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

  完全达到了预期的写作目的。

  第四档(1316)

  完成了试题规定的任务。

  虽漏掉12个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。

  应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

  语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂结构或词汇所致。

  应用了简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

  达到了预期的写作目的。

  第三档(912)

  基本完成了试题规定的任务。

  虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。

  应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

  有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。

  应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。

  整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。

  第二档(58)

  未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

  漏掉或未描述一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。

  语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

  有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。

  较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯。

  信息未能清楚传达给读者。

  第一档(14)

  未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

  明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。

  语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

  较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。

  缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。

  信息未能传达给读者。0

  未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

  四、说明:

  1、内容要点可用不同方式表达。

  2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

  五、Possible version

Dear Linda

  I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic GamesI know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may helpFirstly, it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons laterSecondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of classDon’t be afraid of making mistakesThen try to listen and read more in ChineseWhat’s more, you’d better plan your time well and study it regularly every dayAbove all, you should be confident in yourself and don’t give up whenever you meet with difficultyI’m sure you will succeed through your hard work

  Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China

Yours,

Li Hua


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