Question

【题目】介绍自己的班级

要求：1、必须包含上述提示的内容。2、词数在80左右。

Answer 1

【答案】My class
I am a middle school student. I am in class 1 Grade 8. My class is like a big family. I love it very much. There are my favorite teachers and classmates in my class. My teachers are very kind and to us. All of my classmates are very helpful and friendly. We are like brothers and sisters. In class, we listen to the teachers carefully. And after class, we do many interesting things. Such as listening to music, drawing pictures, making cards and so on. I think our class is not only a class, but also a big family. This is my class. And I love it forever.

【解析】

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