Question

【题目】书面表达

最近你和你的同学就“中学生目前存在的问题”展开了讨论。现在请你以此为话题，参照表内提供的信息，写一篇英语短文。

注意：1、所写内容要包括表格中的信息和你所补全的信息，可适当增加细节

2、开头部分已写好，你只需要接着写。

3、词数：不少于80词。

Problems	Causes （原因）	Advice
1.argue with parents	...	Have a talk with parents, understand each other...
2. can’t sleep well before exams	Worry about grades	...
3.feel lonely	...	...

Rencently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problem.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problems.

Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents. That is because their parents alwaysask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like. If they have a talk with their parents, they can understand each other.

Some say they can’t sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades. They shouldtake a long walk to relax before going to bed.

Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends. As the only kid in thefamily, students should take part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用主从复合句为文章增色不少。如That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like. 这是因为他们的父母总是要求他们学习，他们觉得他们没有空闲的时间做自己喜欢的。If they have a talk with their parents, they can understand each other如果他们与他们的父母交谈，他们可以互相了解。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。