Question

15．假如你是Kim，请给你最想交流的人写一封信，介绍你某一学科的一次考试，包括考前、考中和考后的感受．
提示：1．请补全横线上的称谓；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3．词数在80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
DearCarol，
I'm writing to tell you about myEnglish exam．You know I'm not good at English．I find it difficult．My English teacher advised me to listen to something interesting and do more exercises．I did what she told me and made progress．We had an English exam last week．I was very nervous．But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully．For the first time I did well．I'm so happy and I feel successful now．I want to share my happiness with you．Let's help each other．
Yours，Kim

Yours，
Kim．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是给你最想交流的人写一封信，介绍你某一学科的一次考试，包括考前、考中和考后的感受，注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．考前
2．考中；
3．考后
 
常用到的重点短语：
be good at 擅长
advise sb to do sth 建议某人去做某事
make progress 取得进步
share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
【高分句型】
 1．You know①②I'm not good at English．
①know后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②be good at 擅长
2．I did ①what she told me and②made progress．
①what引导的宾语从句，作为did的宾语．
②make progress 取得进步
3．For the first time I did well．
For the first time 第一次

解答 Dear Carol，
I'm writing to tell you about my English exam．You know I'm not good at English．【高分句型】I find it difficult．My English teacher advised me to listen to something interesting and do more exercises．I did what she told me and made progress．（考前）【高分句型】We had an English exam last week．I was very nervous．But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully．（考中）For the first time I did well．【高分句型】I'm so happy and I feel successful now．（考后）I want to share my happiness with you．Let's help each other．
Yours，Kim

点评 应用文写作不同于其他作文的一个特点就是格式问题，需要注意英语书信的书写格式不同于中文书信．另外就是写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数．另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依．