Question

提示：现在电脑被广泛使用，因特网越来越受欢迎。但学生和老师及父母之间对此看法不一样。请根据以下要点，写一篇短文，并表达自己的观点。

学生的观点	可以上网聊天，交朋友和购物； 可以打游戏，听音乐使自己放松； 可以学到很多知识。
老师家长的观点	网上交友不安全； 浪费时间，影响学习。
我的观点	很有用，可以查资料、画画、收发邮件、看电影等。 不要沉迷于游戏和聊天而影响学习。

注意：1. 词数70左右；短文开头已写好，不计入总词数；

2. 短文必须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。

Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular. Many students like chatting and playing computer games online. They think chatting and playing computer games online can make them feel relaxed after school. They can also make a lot of friends and learn a lot of knowledge. However, most teachers and their parents don’t think it is safe to make friends online. Besides, it is a waste of time to chat online and play computer games. They are bad for their studies.
　　I think it’s useful to use computer ,we can look up information on line,we can draw and send and receive e-mail and see the film,but do not indulge in the game and chat affect learning.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据汉语和英语提示写一篇因特网越来越受欢迎。但学生和老师及父母之间对此看法不一样,文中根据三方面的建议学生，老师和家长，还有作者自己的观点，使用了becoming more and more popular，They think chatting and playing computer games online can make them feel relaxed after school.注意一些固定搭配和词组，考查了学生的综合能力。

【亮点说明】这篇文章构思新颖，内容包括面很全，语言组织力很强，切中题意，文中出现了一些好的句型如：their parents don’t think it is safe to make friends online. Besides, it is a waste of time to chat online and play computer games. They are bad for their studies.使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理和说服力。

考点：给材料作文。