Question

介绍你朋友王峰的家乡:

1.他的家乡是无锡，是一个非常美丽的城市，这儿的空气清新。

2.住在一个现代化的城镇，镇上有个剧场，还有一个美丽的公园。

3.早晨人们喜欢在公园慢跑；公园是他最喜欢的地方，因为在那可以和很多朋友聊天。

4.他非常喜欢他的家乡，我们在盼望游览他的家乡。

Wang Feng is a friend of mine.
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Answer 1

Wang Feng is a friend of mine. His hometown is in Wuxi. It is a beautiful city.The air is fresh here.He lives in a modern town.There is a theatre in town.There is also a beautiful park.People like jogging in the park in the morning.The park is his favourite place because he can chat with many friends there.He likes his hometown very much.We are looking forward to visiting his hometown.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，主要用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如like doing sth, chat with sb ，look forward to doing等短语，文中还用到了原因状语从句The park is his favourite place because he can chat with many friends there. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。