Question

书面表达(15分)

英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：

1 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；2 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；

3词数：80左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；

提示词：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard

Monday, June 30 Sunny

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”______________________________________________

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Monday, June 30 Sunny

 

 

Answer 1

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇日记，关于自己听了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹后的感受及自己如何向其学习。应该用第一人称。写作前先根据话题列出提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用，最后串联起来。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。在80词左右的篇幅中，恰当地运用了一些短语和句式，如used to， learn from，take care of，try one’s best to do等。

考点：话题作文。