Question

【题目】书面表达。（10分）

假设Becky是你最好的朋友，请根据下面的信息，写一篇短文介绍一下Becky。要求:70词左右。

Becky：14岁,来自美国。 爱好：打篮球和弹钢琴。 到校时间：早上7:40 。

到校方式：乘公共汽车 。 家规：父母要求严格，放学回家做作业，饭后洗餐具。

最喜爱的动物：狗，友好又有趣。看这张照片，她正在和狗一起玩。

My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My best friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Becky. She is fourteen years old. She is from the United States. She likes playing basketball and playing the piano. She gets to school at 7:40a.m. It takes her about half an hour to take the bus to the school. Her parents are strict with her. She has to go home to do homework after school. After dinner, she has to do the dishes. Her favorite animal is dogs. Because she thinks it is friendly and interesting. Look at this photo, and she is playing with a dog.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友Becky。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： Her name is…，She is…, It takes sb time to do sth, She has to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整地表达出提纲中所要求的内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍她的年龄，国籍，喜好，学习和生活情况，最后介绍她的一张照片。此处be from, play basketball, play the piano, take the bus, be strict with, do the dishes等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。