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这是一幅你们学校的平面图，请用简洁的语言介绍一下校园的分布，词数80个左右．

注：1．叙述要有条理，方位清楚，应包括图中的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使意思连贯．(但不得写出自己或学校的真实名称)

2．句子开头已给出，请你接下去写．(flowerbeds花圃；main主要的)

This is a map of my school. ________________________________

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学生：习作： 　　This is a map of my school. When you come into the school gate, you will see a tall teaching is(X1) in the middle of the school. There are two flowerbeds on either sides(X2) of the main road. On the left, there is a library building. On the right, there is a office building(X3). A big playground is behind the teaching building. You can find a computer room next to the playground. You can see many trees around the school. My school isn't big or beautiful(X4). 　　剖析：1．see sth．后接的应是宾语补足语，所以此处的is应去掉． 　　2．either两者中的任何一个，应跟名词的单数形式，所以sides应改为side． 　　3．office开始的是元音音素，所以应用冠词an． 　　4．not…or连接的是并列的两项否定，而此处说的是“我们的学校不大但却很漂亮”，所以应改为not…but． 　　总评：本文覆盖了所有内容要点，叙述有条理，方位清楚有序．