Question

假如你是九年级学生李华，给美国的笔友David写一封80字左右的信，介绍你校毕业班的学习情况。内容要点如下：

还有一个月要毕业了，同学们都致力于刻苦学习各门功课。

老师对学生既友好又严格要求，一些学生因考试而压力大。

青少年辅导员建议我们要劳逸结合，不要熬夜。

老师鼓励我们使用橙色，因为它能带来成功和使人振奋。

我觉得对学生来说适当放松自己是必要的，比如………

注意：1.文章必须包含所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

      2.第5点作适当发挥。

      3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Dear David

     How are you? I am going to leave school in a month.                              

                                                                                

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                                                

                                                                                

Can you offer me some advice ? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear David

     How are you? I am going to leave school in a month.，so all the students are busy studying hard sons. Our teachers are very strict with us and very kind to us as well. Some of us are almost stressed out because of the coming examination. The Youngth Counsellor advises us to combine work with rest and not to stay up late.  Our teachers encourage us to use orange because it can bring us success and cheer us up. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to relax ourselves properly, such as taking a walk after supper, playing basketball sometimes and so on.

Can you offer me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍毕业班学习情况的文章。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。

【亮点说明】这篇文章使用了一些固定句型和短语如encourage sb to do sth，it is necessary for us students to relax ourselves properly等等，这些都为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。