Question

书面表达。（10分）

以My hobby为题介绍一下自己的爱好，写一篇60词左右的短文。

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Answer 1

Everyone has their own hobbies, my hobby is bird watching! I am very fond of birds, a variety of birds. I have a telescope, with its clear to see that a variety of birds, I would like to learn about birds of knowledge, and buying books about birds, so that will be able to more detailed understanding of birds, because the world's many different types of birds, just to do these are not enough, I would like to continue their efforts to learn more about birds, so a successful bird-watching enthusiasts!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I would like to learn about birds of knowledge, and buying books about birds, so that will be able to more detailed understanding of birds,等，so that等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。