Question

书面表达（15分）

社会的发展带来了一系列的环境问题，如：水污染，动物灭绝等。如何使我们的世界变得更加美好，是我们要思考的一个问题。请你根据所学内容，以“Let’s Make Our World More Beautiful”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

                          

Our environment is getting worse and worse,                                                                                       

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Let’s Make Our World More Beautiful  

Our environment is getting worse and worse,    such as the water is getting dirtier and dirtier and many animals are in danger. What should we do to protect our environment?                                                                                  

First, I think we should save every drop of water. Second, we should protect animals. Animals are our friends and they can give us joy. We should share the world with them. Third, we’d better plant more trees. If everyone try their best to protect our environment, our would will become more and more beautiful.  

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，写一篇如何让世界变得更美好的短文。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。

考点：命题作文的写作

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。