Question

10．在生活中，人们常用有一些快乐需要分享，烦恼需要倾诉，这时就需要一个好的倾听者．请以Be a good listener 为题写一篇短文，内容必须包括以下要点：
1．一次倾听的经历（时间、人物、经过）
2．你对倾听的认识（至少两点）
注意：1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2．词数在80--100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数．
Be a good listener
I strongly believe it is important to be a good listener．
I used to feel stressed before the exam．However，I kept it to myself，as a result，I felt worried and couldn't pay attention to what the teacher said in class．One day，after
I bravely told it to my close friend，I felt that relaxed．
Being a good listener plays an important role in communication．Parents should listen to their children，so they will understand them better and trust each other．Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships．Students should listen to their classmates，then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other．
In a word，good listening can really make us get closer to each other．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题作文．内容是以Be a good listener 为题写出一次倾听的经历以及你对倾听的认识．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．一次倾听的经历（时间、人物、经过）
2．你对倾听的认识（至少两点）
常用到的重点短语：
used to do sth 过去常常
as a result 因此
pay attention to 留意
listen to sb 聆听某人
in a word 总之
make sb do sth 让某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．However，I kept it to myself，①as a result，I felt worried and couldn't ②pay attention to ③what the teacher said in class．
①as a result相当于一个连词，且要用逗号与后面的句子隔开，是因此，所以的意思
②pay attention to 留意，关注，to是介词．
③what作为引导词的宾语从句，作为介词的宾语．
2．Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships．
so that 引导的目的状语从句．
3．①In a word，good listening can really ②make us get closer to each other．
①in a word 总之
②make sb do sth 让某人做某事，get close to sb接近某人

解答 Be a good listener
I strongly believe it is important to be a good listener．
   I used to feel stressed before the exam．However，I kept it to myself，as a result，I felt worried and couldn't pay attention to what the teacher said in class．【高分句型】One day，after I bravely told it to my close friend，I felt that relaxed．
（一次倾听的经历（时间、人物、经过））
   Being a good listener plays an important role in communication．Parents should listen to their children，so they will understand them better and trust each other．Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships．【高分句型】Students should listen to their classmates，then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other．（你对倾听的认识）
   In a word，good listening can really make us get closer to each other．【高分句型】

点评 这是一个话题作文，要求写出一次倾听的经历以及你对倾听的认识．记叙一次倾听的经历，要把事件的时间，地点，人物，事件的经过写清楚，用第一人称，用一般过去时进行写作．描写自己对倾听的认识，用一般现在时态，要体现出积极向上的思想．短文开头直接表达了作者的观点：当一名好的听众很重要；第二段写自己与人分享自己烦恼前后自己的不同感受；第三段讲明了当一位好的听众的好处；最后一段小结：总而言之，很好地倾听可以让我们彼此走得更近．短文叙述清楚，层次分明．特虽是第三段中，用了一系列的排比句，读起来感到琅琅上口，有一股强大的气势，增强了文章的表达效果．