Question

3．You must have changed a lot from primary school to junior middle school，haven't you？Please talk about your changes from many aspects such as appearance，personality，hobbies，school life and so on．
You must write at least 80words．The beginning of the article has been given．
My life has changed a lot in the last few years．
                              

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others过去我太害羞了不敢在人前讲话．
too+adj/adv+to do sth太…而不能做某事
【高分句型二】
I study so well that  I have been a top student．我学习很努力现在是我们班的第一名．
so…that如此…以至于．that引导的结果状语从句

解答 My life has changed a lot in the last few years．（引出下文）
In the past，I was short．I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】I wasn't interested in studying and hated tests，so I was weak in all my subjects． And I was silent in class．What's more，I played with my friends every day after school．（过去）
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm taller than before．I am more outgoing and I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（外表和性格的变化）   I don't be afraid to ask questions in class now． I study so well that I have been a top student．【高分句型二】Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（学习和爱好的改变）Last week，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．School life is busier because we have more subjects．（改变后）
  I hope to get better grades and go to senior high school．So I will study harder and learn more．（愿望和打算）

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