Question

为深入开展“解放思想，改进作风，奋发有为，创先争优”主题教育实践活动，学校正在开展“创建文明班级”活动，请根据下表的内容，以“A Meaningful Activity”为题，向报社投稿，介绍活动有关的情况。

主题	告别陋习，握手文明
目的	根除乱扔、乱吐、乱画、吸烟、喝酒等现象； 提倡穿校服、讲礼貌。
内容	? 举办图片展，进行先进班级评比（环境和行为）等。

要求：1、必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；2、词数：80 - 100；

3、参考词汇：文明 civilization; 校园 campus; 告别陋习，握手文明 “Get rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”

A Meaningful Activity

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Meaningful Activity

??? Our school has now started an activity called “Build Civilized Classes”. The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.

??? We can still see some bad habits in our school. Some students throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some even love smoking and drinking. We require that the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others. During the activity, we have held a picture show, a competition between classes for better environment and behavior, and so on.

We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍为深入开展“解放思想，改进作风，奋发有为，创先争优”主题教育实践活动，学校正在开展“创建文明班级”活动，本文所给材料比较详细，可以按照顺内容提示。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称复数，写作中适当使用固定词组，段落清晰，固定句式的使用会给文章增色不少。

【亮点说明】这篇短文段落分明把材料中内容交代得很清: 文中Our school has now started an activity called “Build Civilized Classes”. The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.点明了主题，使用了号召语言We require that the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others.这使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。