Question

11．假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加郴州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛．演讲的题目是 We should help parents do housework．请你用英诰写一篇演讲稿．
要点提示：

现 象	你常做的家务	你的体会和看法
许多学生懒悄，不愿做家务．	◆修理床铺 ◆浇花 ◆打扫房间 ◆倒垃圾  ◆…	… （至少两点）

参考词汇：lazy，chores，make the bed，water flowers，clean the room，take out the trash，relaxing，interesting，proud，pleased，duty
要求：
1．短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥；
2.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 
3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名．
Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning!I'm Wang Ming．It's my honor to give you a speech．My topic is We should help parents do housework．                        
That's all．Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Now many students are too lazy to do housework现在许多学生太懒了不做家务．
too…to do sth 太…而不能做某事
【高分句型二】
When 1 see the tidy room，1 feel proud of myself当我看见整洁的房间，我为自己感到骄傲．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen，
      Good morning!I'm Wang Ming It's my honor to give you a speech．My topic is We should help parents do housework．Now many students are too lazy to do housework．【高分句型一】（现象）But I think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work．（看法）1 often help my parents do many chores．In the morning，I will make the bed and water flowers．They are relaxing and interesting In the evening，I often clean the room and take out the trash．When 1 see the tidy room，1 feel proud of myself．【高分句型二】My parents are pleased with me．（常做的家务）1 think it's our duty to help our parents with some chores．
That's all．Thanks for your listening!

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．