Question

【题目】书面表达
这学期，我校宣布了一条新的校规，即不允许学生带手机来学校。有些人赞成，有些人反对，请你谈谈你的观点，内容包括：
1). 你觉得这条新校规好还是不好？
2). 陈述你的理由（至少两点）；
3). 提醒大家用正确的方法使用手机。
作文要求：
1). 文字通顺，语言连贯，书面整洁；
2). 80词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
This term, our school has a new rule that students mustn't bring their mobile phones to school.

Answer 1

【答案】This term，our school has a new rule that students mustn't bring their mobile phone to school.

I totally agree (I think this new rule is good for us).

Firstly， many students use their mobile phones to chat or play games all the time and even in class. It's bad for our study. Secondly， if you really have something important and want to call your parents， you can ask your teachers for help. They're always ready to help you， so there's no need to bring the mobile phones to school.

All in all， our school makes rules to help us and we should obey them. Don't bring your mobile phones to school and remember to use your mobile phone in a right way.

【解析】这是一篇关于校规不允许带手机的问题，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。
一. 写作步骤：
1.明确写作目的。开头已给出。
2.第二段作者赞成观点new rule is good for us
3.第三段陈述手机不利的理由，使用顺序副词Firstly.......Secondly........so
4.总结All in all， our school makes rules to help us，作者紧扣观点新校规是为了帮助我们。接着提醒大家正确使用手机
二. 根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。
三. 连词成句，连句成篇，尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。