Question

14．我们的身体是最宝贵的财富之一，健康高于一切．没有一个强健的身体，一切无从谈起．近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注．学生们面临着严重的健康问题．请你围绕学生面临的健康问题，谈谈怎样才能保持健康．
要求：1词数：80-100词  2不要逐句翻译．
3字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰．
To Keep Healthy
Everyone wants to keep healthy today，especially we students．But we don't pay attention to our health．
Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning．Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day，especially at theweekends．Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke．They're all doing harm to us．
It is important for us to have good habits．We should eat breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play games for a short time，then have a rest．We can alsojoin in some clubs．The most important is that we should do more sports．
I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是围绕学生面临的健康问题，谈谈怎样才能保持健康．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1学生们面临的健康问题
2怎样才能保持健康
常用到的重点短语：
do harm to 对…有害
have a rest休息
join in 参加
keep healthy保持健康
【高分句型】
1．Many boys think①②it is cool to drink or smoke．
①think后跟省略了that的宾语从句．
②it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
2．The most important is that we should do more sports．
that引导的是表语从句，和is构成系表结构．

解答 To Keep Healthy
  Everyone wants to keep healthy today，especially we students．But we don't pay attention to our health．
  Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning．Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day，especially at theweekends．Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke．【高分句型】They're all doing harm to us．（学生们面临的健康问题）
It is important for us to have good habits．We should eat breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play games for a short time，then have a rest．We can also join in some clubs．The most important is that we should do more sports．【高分句型】（怎样才能保持健康）
I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．