Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动， 请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。

提示问题：

1. What’s your hobby?

2. Why do you like it?

3. When did you start it?

4. How do you benefit from(得益于） it?

要求：

1. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；

2. 不少于80词。

My hobby

Answer 1

【答案】My Hobby

I have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.

【解析】

本篇作文按照要求可分为4块儿内容，首先指出我的爱好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接着说明为什么喜欢这个爱好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old.我开始这个爱好的时间，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.自己的收获以及期望. 中间用到短语such as…,以及连词because…., when….and…等，使文章表达清晰，也具有连贯性，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的文章。