Question

17．Write at least 50words about"My dream"．Use the suggested questions below．（结合你的实际，根据问题提示并围绕问题提示，以"我的梦想"为题，写至少五十个词短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯，标点符号不占格．）
Use the following points as a reference．
☆Do you have any dream？
☆What do you want to be when you grow up？
☆What should you do to realize（实现） your dream？
（考生注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）：
My dream．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport．有人想成为一个篮球运动员，因为他们擅长运动．这是一个原因状语从句．主句主语someone某人，谓语动词用单数．want to be想要成为什么．be good at擅长．they他们，因此用be动词复数are．
句型二：
I must practise harder and harder in order to come true my dream．为了实现我的梦想，我必须更加努力地练习．主语I，must情态动词后用动词原形practise．harder and harder越来越努力．in order to为了…come true实现．

解答 What do I want to do when I grow up？Someone wants to be a doctor．Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport．【高分句型一】（其他人的梦想）I like playing the piano and I am good at it．So I want to become a piano player．（我的梦想） Play the piano is very interesting．And you can learn something of music．Piano can make you like music．A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano．（原因）
I play the piano when I'm ten years old．I must practise harder and harder in order to come true my dream．【高分句型二】（如何实现梦想）
Becoming a piano play is a hard job．But I believe I can do it．（鼓励自己）

点评 写作时要明确要点，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，语法正确，结合要求，注意作文题材，不要写跑题．日常积累一些短语和词句．