Question

10．假如你是李华，你们学校正就"感恩父母，从我做起"这一话题开展大讨论．请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈为什么要感恩父母，你通常在业余时间帮父母做什么，以及你这样做的感受．
提示词语：think，bring up，work，make money，support，housework，cook，clean，wash，happy，
proud
提示问题：●Why is it important for you to thank parents？
●What do you usually do for them in your spare time？
●How do you feel？
At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．                          
提示词语：hold，activity，get together，sing，eat，game，gift，wish
提示问题：●When and where are you going to celebrate XiaoMing's birthday？
●What are you going to do at the party？
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for Xiao Ming's birthday？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They①not only work hard ②to make money but also look after us carefully．
①not only…but also…不仅…而且…
②动词不定式做目的状语．
【高分句型二】
My parents ①are proud of me②because I can③make them feel relaxed．
①be proud of：以…为骄傲
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③make sb do sth让某人做某事．

解答 At my school，we are talking about what we can do to thank parents．My classmates and I think we should do something for them．Because they bring us up．They not only work hard to make money but also look after us carefully．【高分句型一】（为什么要感恩父母）
To thank my parents，I always take some actions．First of all，I usually help my parents do some housework in my spare time．For example：help them clean the floor，wash the dishes on weekends and help them cook breakfast and so on．（在业余时间帮父母做什么）
My parents are proud of me because I can make them feel relaxed．【高分句型二】I feel very happy too．（感受）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．