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8．假如你是阳光中学的李磊，你在学校网站看到国际学生Stephen的求助信．请根据Stephen信的内容，用英语给Stephen写一封回信，介绍你校图书馆借书的要求和流程．

HELP NEEDED I'm Stephen，an intemational student from Britain．I would like to know how to borrow books from the school library．Should I bring my student's card with me？How long can I keep a book？I wonder if you can provide any tips on borrowing books． Please email me at Stephen HYPERLINK"mailto：220@yahoo．com．Thank"220@yahoo．com．Thank you． Stephen

注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library．Remember to go to the library with your student's card．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian．Then you can choose books you want．At last you can take the books away after you show them to a librarian．You can only borrow 3 books at a time and keep them for a month．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer．Please email me if you have any other questions．
Yours faithfully，Li Lei

Yours faithfully．
Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封信，需要回答来信中的问题，怎么借书，需不需要带学生证，书可以借多久以及借书的步骤，写作时时态应该用一般现在时，人称主要为第二人称，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．
高分句型分析：
1．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian．当你进入图书馆时，首先你得把学生证给图书管理员看看．
这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候，show sth．to sb．把某物给某人看．
2．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer．如果你想保持更长的时间，你将不得不回到图书馆去更新这些书．
这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时．

解答 Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you how to borrow books from the school library【第一句，点明主题】．Remember to go to the library with your student's card．When you enter the library，first show your student's card to a librarian【高分句型一，when引导的时间状语从句】．Then you can choose books you want．At last you can take the books away after you show them to a librarian．【借书步骤】． You can only borrow 3 books at a time and keep them for a month．You will have to go back to the library to renew the books if you want to keep them longer【高分句型二，if引导的条件状语从句】【借书时间】． Please email me if you have any other questions． 
Yours faithfully，
Li Lei

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．