假如你叫王玲玲,下表是你的家庭情况,请写一篇家庭的自我介绍,要求有所拓展,字数不少于50。
|
Wang Ling ling |
Mr Wang |
Mrs Wang |
Wang Fang |
Age |
13 |
38 |
36 |
7 |
Job |
student |
manager |
nurse |
|
Place |
at school |
hotel |
hospital |
|
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One possible version:
My name is Wang Lingling. I’m 13. And I am a student at school. My father is Mr Wang. He is 38. And he is a manager at a hotel. Mrs Wang is my mother and she is 36. She is a nurse at a hospital. My sister is Wang Fang and she is 7. I love my family members. We are very happy.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,介绍个人情况及家庭成员。本题给出的材料较为详细。动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题,然后组织成文。注意叙述的条理性,适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式,在叙述中使用连接词,使叙述逻辑更为合理,层次更加分明,为文章增色不少.如: at school 在学校,等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点:考查提纲作文。
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