Question

【题目】今年入冬以来，以北京为首的各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。假如你是Li Hua，作为一个中学生，

你对我国空气污染的看法是什么呢？请分析空气污染的现象、原因、应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。

要点提示：

1. 我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2点）

2. 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2点）

3. 减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2点）

要求：

1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear students,

As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the srious air pollution.______________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. for example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people’s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What’s more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what’s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.

【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。把要点写全面，不要漏掉任何要点。注意文章文体和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文写作思路清晰，时态运用也很得当。更为难能可贵的是通篇文章没有出现任何语法错误。

这篇短文结构严谨，主要是一些基础句型的应用非常准确。先提出问题，分析问题，后阐述解决问题的办法，层次分明。最后，发出倡议：呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染Protectingtheenvironmentisourduty.Everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingtheearth.