Question

你想在QQ上结交一些笔友。请根据表格提供的内容介绍你自己的过去、现在和未来。注意时态的正确使用。60--80词左右。（10分）

Name:    David	Date of birth:  11/23/1996	Place of birth:   Jiangsu
Past	Now	Future
In 2000: start learning English In 2002: take part in Hope English Competition; win the first prize; like English more	study in a middle school; like doing sports; play… twice a week	go to university; want to be a reporter; travel all over the world

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Answer 1

My name is David. I was born in Jiangsu, on November 23rd, 1996. Let me tell you something about myself. When I was 4, I started to learn English. I practiced speaking and reading very often. In 2002, I took part in the Hope English Competition. Luckily, I won the first prize in the group of pupils. Now I am a middle school student. I like doing sports and I play table tennis twice a week. Exercise makes me happy and strong. I want to go to university after leaving high school. I am going to be a reporter. And I like traveling. I am going to travel all over the world in the future.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己的短文，注意从过去,现在和未来三个方面进行介绍。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态较为复杂,注意谓语动词与时间状语的一致。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。