Question

假如你Dave，请根据表格信息介绍自己，可适发挥。

要求：语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确。大约80词左右。

Name	Dave	Age	13
Appearance（外貌）	中等个子，偏瘦，黑色短发
Hobbies（爱好）	听音乐，打篮球 …
上周末活动	忙碌高兴	周六上午做作业；下午和父母开车去奶奶家 ……
上周日上午和朋友打篮球；下午听音乐……

My name is Dave. I’m 13.

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Answer 1

My name is Dave. I’m 13. I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.

Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目只给出了主要写作内容，故动笔前先要认真阅读题目，确定写作要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一二人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】范文运用一些常见短语：did my homework做家庭作业 at home 在家listened to听 did some reading做阅读。Last weekend, I was busy but happy这外句子运用了but连接两个并列的形容词。And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading这个句子中and连接两个并列的谓语动词，时态保持一致。

考点： 提纲类作文。