Question

11．根据下面图表提示，写一篇演讲稿，号召人们支持"希望工程"．

PROJECT HOPE	机构 宗旨	●建学校 ●资助贫困学生
	资金 来源	●募捐（来自政府或世界各地民间）
	募捐 方式	●做广告、分发传单等号召人们捐赠 ●组织义演等活动募集资金

参考词汇：1）make donations捐赠  2）give out leaflets分发传单  3）charity shows义演
要  求：意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范，内容可适当发挥，词数80左右．不包含已给出的句子的词数．
Let's Help Project Hope
Dear friends，
Project Hope is a Chinese charity．It helps build schools and helps poor students in
poor areas．It raises money from the governments or people from all over the world．I think it is
meaningful for us to support Project Hope and we should do something for it．For example，we
can ask people to make donations to it by advertising or giving out leaflets．We can also organize
charity shows or do voluntary work to raise money for Project Hope．
Welcome to join Project Hope．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是写一篇演讲稿，号召人们支持"希望工程"．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1  机构宗旨建学校；资助贫困学生
2  资金来源：募捐（来自政府或世界各地民间）
3  募捐方式：做广告、分发传单等号召人们捐赠；组织义演等活动募集资金
常用到的重点短语：
all over the world 全世界
for example 例如
ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
give out 捐赠
【高分句型】
1．I think ①②it is meaningful for us to support Project Hope and we should do something for it．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
2．①For example，we can ②ask people to make donations to it ③by advertising or giving out leaflets．
①for example 例如
②ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
③by+doing  通过某种方法
3．We can also organize charity shows ①or do voluntary work②to raise money for Project Hope．
①or表示或者，表选择
②to raise money 动词不定式做目的状语

解答 Let's Help Project Hope
Dear friends，
      Project Hope is a Chinese charity．It helps build schools and helps poor students in poor areas．（ 机构宗旨建学校；资助贫困学生）It raises money from the governments or people from all over the world．（ 资金来源：募捐）I think it is meaningful for us to support Project Hope and we should do something for it．【高分句型】For example，we can ask people to make donations to it by advertising or giving out leaflets．【高分句型】We can also organize charity shows or do voluntary work to raise money for Project Hope．【高分句型】（募捐方式）
      Welcome to join Project Hope．

点评 一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量．然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误．所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养．