Question

4．三年的初中生活即将结束，三年中给你留下最深印象的是哪位老师？为什么？请结合自身经历，以"The teacher l will never forget"为题，写一篇短文．
内容包括：
1．简要介绍老师的性格或特长
.2．至少列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习或生活上帮助你，给你留下深刻印象的，
3．感谢老师，祝福老师．
作文要求：
1.80字左右．
2．必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥．
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校，老师的姓名请一律使用Mr Li或Ms Li．
The teacher I will never forget
            ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"The teacher l will never forget"为题谈谈三年中给你留下最深印象的是哪位老师？为什么？时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．简要介绍老师的性格或特长
2．至少列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习或生活上帮助你，给你留下深刻印象的，
3．感谢老师，祝福老师．
常用到的重点短语：
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
be worried about 担心
offer sb sth 给某人提供某物
with one's help 在某人的帮助下

【高分句型】
1．The teacher I will never forget is Mr Li，an English teacher．
I will never forget是省略了关系词who的定语从句，who做宾语，故省略，修饰先行词the teacher．
2．He helped us not only in class but also after class．
not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分．
3．About two years ago，Mr Li noticed①that I ②was worried about my poor pronunciation．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为notice的宾语．
②be worried about 担心

解答 The teacher I will never forget
How time flies!Three years has passed since I became a middle school student．I had many good memories of my classmates and teachers．
The teacher I will never forget is Mr Li，an English teacher．【高分句型】He is very kind and friendly．（介绍老师的性格）He helped us not only in class but also after class．【高分句型】About two years ago，Mr Li noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation．【高分句型】So he offered me many suggestions to improve it，and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class．With his help，my pronunciation has greatly improved．（举例说明对自己的帮助）
I want to say thanks to Mr Li，and I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!（感谢老师，祝福老师）

点评 本题是写一篇给定要求的书面表达，写作的话题为我难忘的老师，内容包括难忘老师的姓名，所教，性格特征，和对我所提供的帮助，最后对老师表示祝愿，写作时应符合题意，同时要注意时态的合理使用和语言的准确性．