Question

某英文杂志正在举办以“How do you get on well with your classmates?”为主题的征文比赛，假设你是李明，请你写一篇短文参赛，文中请先简单介绍自己，然后说说你平时是怎样与同学相处的，并谈谈你对同学之间友谊的认识或看法。
提示词语：name, together, help, fun, friendship
How I get on well with my classmates

Answer 1

How I get on well with my classmates
My name is Li Ming, a fifteen-year-old boy in Grade 3 in No.1 Middle School. I like making friends and most of my classmates are my good friends.
At school, we not only study but also play together. After school we either do homework or have fun together. Besides, we often help each other when we meet difficulties.
No man is an island, as the saying goes: a man without friends is an angel without wings. I am sure I can fly higher and farther with the wings of friendship.

解析第一档：（13~15分）
完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚且积极向上，内容丰富。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。 
第二档：（9~12分）
基本符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（5~8分） 
部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不够清楚，内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。                                                    
第四档：（0~4分） 
与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。