Question

书面表达

根据中文提示和英文内容，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。假如你是John,今天你在网上看到了下面的帖子。请根据帖子内容，谈谈你的经历或看法，并针对作者的困惑提出一些建议(不少于三条)。

注意：不要写出真实校名和姓名。

　　Post：Re：“What shall I do?”

　　Posted by John on 6/May/09

　　Dear Madam,

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One possible version： 　　Dear Madam, 　　I'm sorry to know that you have SO much trouble with your daughter, and I don’t think 8he should always play computer games．But don’t worry．You can ask her teacher for help Or you can invite some of her friends to have a word with her．You’d better encourage her to find out that spending too much time 011-computer games is bad for her health and studies．Try to encourage her to do other things instead of playing computer games．What’s more, as her mother, you should learn 　　something about computer games so that you and your daughter may have something to talk about．Besides, you may find some topics that your daughter is interested in, and then she may talk with you．Don't lose heart．It win be all right． John 　　书面表达评分标准： 　　第一档：(15－13分) 　　完全符合题目要求，内容完整、丰富，思想健康、积极向上。能够使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 第二档：(12－9分) 　　基本符合题目要求，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：(8－5分) 　　部分内容符合题目要求，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 　　第四档：(4－0分) 　　与题目有关的内容不多，只能简单拼凑一些词语，所写内容难以理解。