Question

五一长假即将来临，作为初三毕业生的你，打算怎样度过这个假期？你会和家人去旅行还是呆在家里认真复习？根据下面的建议，请你给自己写个五一假期计划。
我先要制定好计划如何安排我的假期,以确保劳逸结合。
我要认真完成所有的作业，绝不马虎对待。必要时打电话问老师。
我还要进行体育锻炼,为严格的体育考试做准备。
我还要……。
要求：涵盖以上要点，不出现真实姓名。
字数在80左右，开头已给出，不计入词数。
The May Day holiday is coming soon. As a senior, who will finish school in less than sixty days, I will make full use of the holiday.___________________________________    

Answer 1

The May Day holiday is coming soon. As a senior who will finish school in less than sixty days, I will make full use of the holiday. First I need to make a plan for this holiday so that I can learn well and have a good rest as well. I must finish all my homework carefully, I mustn’t be careless with my homework. When I have problems with my homework, I will call my teachers to ask for help if necessary. And I plan to take exercise to get ready for the strict PE tests. I plan to go over/review my notes, I don’t want to waste the time, After June, when I take exams, I think I can have a really relaxing holiday.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求给自己制定一个五一假期计划。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般将来时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。