Question

15．假设你是李华，向笔友Tom写一封信要点提示如下：
1．两年前你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独…
2．两年中Tom多次给你写信，他在信中鼓励你多交朋友；告诉你学好英语的方法；和你分享快乐；你变得…
3．告诉他你会努力学习，上一所好的高中，上大学，将来当一名医生．
4．近年来你的家乡发生了很大的变化，你邀请他来你的家乡玩．
参考词汇：分享快乐share happiness  高中 senior high school 家乡hometown
注意：
1．信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；
2．词数80左右．
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．
Dear Tom，
How time flies!We have been friends for two years．I'm writing to thank you for your great help!
Two years ago，                                               
Hope to see you soon!
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：These two years，you wrote me many times and always encouraged me to make friends as many as possible．这两年，你给我写了很多信，总是鼓励我尽可能多交朋友．encourage sb  to do sth鼓励某人做某事，as many as possible尽可能多的
高分句型二：Besides，you were always sharing happiness with me，which made my life more colorful．此外，你总是与我分享快乐，这使我的生活更加丰富多彩．besides此外，还有，表意思的递进；share sth with sb与某人分享某物；which 引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．

解答 Dear Tom，
How time flies!We have been friends for two years．I'm writing to thank you for your great help!
Two years ago，you came to the new class，no friends，feel lonely．（两年前你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独）These two years，you wrote me many times and always encouraged me to make friends as many as possible．（高分句型一）When I had trouble with my English，you told me many good ways to improve it．Besides，you were always sharing happiness with me，which made my life more colorful．（高分句型二）Thanks to your help，I have become more confident and positive．I really appreciate your help．（两年中Tom对我的帮助）
I will work hard in order to enter a good senior high school．I want to be a doctor after graduating from a university in the future．（告诉Tom在学习方面的情况及自己的理想）
These years，great changes have taken place in my hometown and I hope you can come to my hometown to experience the new changes．（近年来家乡发生了很大的变化，邀请他来家乡玩．）Hope to see you soon!
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．