Question

去年秋季始，江苏省全面实施教育新政，严格控制学生在校时间，转变课堂教学方式，请你就实施教育新政前后你校的变化写一篇英文报道，同时发表你个人看法。

教育新政前	教育新政后
学生在校学习时间长，每天超过十个小时。	在校学习时间减少，每天不到七个小时。
课堂上只要认真听老师讲授就行了。	课堂上同学们经常互相讨论，有充足的自学时间。
学生身心疲惫，上课经常迟到。	学生兴趣高，到校准时，学习能力明显增强。
个人看法	……

注意：1. 请根据以上提供的信息写报道，个人看法可自由发挥。

2. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。

3. 词数：100词左右；开头已写好，不计入总词数。

4. 参考词汇：实施conduct, 教育新政 the New Educational Policy。

My school conducted the New Educational Policy last autumn and great changes have taken place since then.

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Answer 1

My school conducted the New Educational Policy last autumn and great changes have taken place since then.

Before the New Educational Policy, we had to study at school for too long, usually for over ten hours every day. In class, we just listened to our teachers carefully. Feeling tired from to time, we used to be late for school.

Now we spend less than seven hours studying at school every day. In class, my classmates and I often have a hot discussion with each other and have enough time to learn on our own. As a result, all of us become so interested in our subjects that we are no longer late for school and our learning abilities are getting stronger and stronger.

I think that the New Educational Policy is meaningful because it has helped us learn better, improve all our abilities and enjoy ourselves at the same time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据汉语和英语提示写一篇通过施教育新政改造后学校学生学习发生了哪些改变，作者陈述了个人观点。文中必须用到Before和Now以前和现在的对照，以第一人称的形式来写阐述了作者的个人观点，使用了listened to our teachers carefully，we spend less than seven hours studying at school every day注意一些固定搭配和词组，考查了学生的综合能力。

【亮点说明】这篇文章构思新颖，内容包括面很全，语言组织力很强，切中题意，文中出现了一些好的句型如：enough time to learn on our own.. all of us become so interested in our subjects that we are no longer late for school and our learning abilities are getting stronger and stronger.

使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：给材料作文。