Question

书面表达（共10分）

以“假如我是老师”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语小短文。

If I were a teacher

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

If I were a teacher

If I were a teacher, I would not treat my students just as some know-nothing kids. I wouldn't give them homework that can never be done. If I were a teacher, I would try my best to let them like me, not be afraid of me. I wouldn't teach them just as if I were a sage. If I were a teacher, I would make friends with my students. I would respect them and understand them. If I were a teacher, I would make study a happy thing to my students, but not a burden to them.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。我们可以发挥想象，假如我是一位老师，应该对我的学生做哪些事情。即在学习生活中，作为一名学生，你希望你的老师对你做的事情。转换一下角色，用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来即可。本文主要用虚拟语气，主语是第一人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: If I were a teacher, I would not treat my students just as some know-nothing kids，假如我是一名老师，我不会把我的学生看做物质的孩子；try my best to let them like me, not be afraid of me.尽我的所能让学生喜欢我，而不是怕我等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。