Question

根据下面表格信息写一篇短文，介绍该校学生参加各种活动的情况。首句已给出。

Activity	Every Day	Once or Twice a week	Three or Four Times a week
Watch TV	85%	2%	13%
Use the Internet	0%	44%	56%
Read English Books	90%	10%	0%
Exercise	15%	10%	75%

 

Answer 1

 
Here are the results of the student activity at No. 1 Middle School. According to the survey, most students watch TV everyday. Some students watch TV three or four times a week. And only 2% students watch TV once or twice a week. All students use the internet. Some use it once or twice a week, but more students use it three or four times a week. They think from the internet they can learn much useful information. As for reading English books, 90% students read English book everyday, and the left 10% students read them once or twice a week. Exercise is important for students. Most students exercise three or four times a week. And about 10% students exercise once or twice a week. About 15% students do sports everyday.

试题分析：这是一篇看图表作文。表格中包含了4项活动，以及各项活动调查结果。写作时要理清要点，不要出现遗漏。并将各要点的内容用正确的语言表述出来。在陈述时可适当使用不同的词语，使文章更生动。也可加入一些总结性的，承接性的句子和短语，让文章更流畅和富有逻辑。
【亮点说明】这篇文章紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了一些不错的短语和表达方式，如：According to the survey,根据调查；Some use it once or twice a week, but more students use it three or four times a week.一些同学一周使用一两次，但更多的同学一周两三次。But使两个句子形成了对比，而且用到了比较级。Exercise is important for students.运动对学生很重要。这是个承接句子，引出了下文。