Question

【题目】书面表达 (计10分)

请根据以下中文提示，以My best friend ——Mary为题，用英语写一篇短文。

词数在60个左右。要点如下：

1.Mary来自美国，现在和父母居住在北京。

2.又高又苗条，戴着眼镜，看上去讨人喜欢。

3.擅长画画和跳舞，热爱运动，在空闲时间常常和朋友们去游泳。

4.她喜欢看书，经常去学校图书馆借书，因为里面有各种各样的书。

5.在学校有很多新朋友，他们对她都很友好。

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend ——Mary

I have a best friend .Her name is Mary. Mary comes from the United States. Now she lives in Beijing with his parents. She is very tall and slim. She has long black hair and big eyes. She always wears glasses and looks lovely. She is good at drawing and dancing. She likes sports very much. In the spare time she with her friends often goes swimming. She also likes reading books. She often borrows books from the school library because there are all kinds of books there. She has many new friends at school. They are all friendly to her.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时，主语为第三人称单数。写作中要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理