Question

【题目】【四川省乐山市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（满分 20分）

近几年，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，他们中的一些不文明行为引起了人们的极大关注。调查显示，中国游客列世界第二不受欢迎的人。为此，请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并提出你的建议，呼吁人们文明出行。

1. 不高声喧哗；

2. 排队候车或就餐；

3. 不随地吐痰或乱扔垃圾；

4. 不乱涂乱画。

注意：1. 词数：80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 参考词汇：spit v. 吐痰；behavior n. 行为。

With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have become a hot

topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good

tourist? Here are some tips for you.

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Answer 1

【答案】

With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have become a hot topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you.

First, we should keep our voice down while talking with friends in public places. Please wait in line if you want to take a bus or have dinner. Also, don’t spit or drop litter whenever you want. Finally, it’s really bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings.

As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behavior, saying no to those bad habits. While enjoying ourselves, we should not only respect local customs, but also take care of the environment.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求就做文明游客提些建议，呼吁人们文明出行。短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。文中要多用祈使句和一些含有情态动词的句子帮助进行表达。短文主要用一般现在时态，第一人称形式进行写作。

写作亮点：短文第一段揭示现象，引入话题；第二段提出了一系列的建议。重点突出，中心明确。每条建议前的副词用得好，比如：first，also, finally等等。让读者一眼就可以看出是几个要点；最后一段明确自己的责任和义务，并呼吁人们行动起来，保护环境，尊重地方习俗，作文明游客。主旨鲜明突出。