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12．根据下面提示写一篇征文．
《学生英文报》正在举行“我的美丽家园”征文活动，请你用英语为该报写一篇征文，介绍我们的家乡-多彩贵州．标题自拟，文章应包括以下要点：
1．贵州的地理位置及概况；
2．宜人的气候和清新的空气；
3．美丽的风景和其他你所了解的内容．
要求：1．征文应不少于80词；
2．文中不得出现真实的个人信息．（贵州的地理位置及概况）I Love GuizhouGuizhou province is located in the southwest of China．Guizhou is very beautiful and simple．（宜人的气候和清新的空气）It has a pleasant climate and clean air．（美丽的风景和其他内容）Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest，such as Huangguosh Waterfall，Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on．Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city，150 kilometers away from Guiyang．It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall，which is clear and cool．It can excite visitors’imagination．Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou，which was built 600 years ago，known as one of China's most attractive towns．I love my hometown-Guizhou．Welcome to Guizhou．．

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分析 这是一篇提示性作文．要求根据所给提示写一篇征文．本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，写作要点有1．贵州的地理位置及概况；2．宜人的气候和清新的空气；3．美丽的风景和其他你所了解的内容，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．本文是介绍美丽的贵州，可以用一般现在时态，用第三人称书写．重点短语及句型有 is rich in，places of interest，It is well known for 等

解答 答案：（贵州的地理位置及概况）I Love GuizhouGuizhou province is located in the southwest of China．Guizhou is very beautiful and simple．（宜人的气候和清新的空气）It has a pleasant climate and clean air．（美丽的风景和其他内容）Guizhou Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest，such as Huangguosh Waterfall，Qingyan Town and Jiaxiu Tower and so on．Huangguoshu Waterfall is located in the southwest of Anshun city，150 kilometers away from Guiyang．It is well known for its rapid and beautiful waterfall，which is clear and cool．It can excite visitors’imagination．Qingyan town is one of the four ancient towns in Guizhou，which was built 600 years ago，known as one of China's most attractive towns．I love my hometown-Guizhou．Welcome to Guizhou．

点评 这是一篇提纲作文，抓住美丽贵州这个主题，要做到语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺．