Question

【题目】Correction 1（2017·新课标I卷）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂Turning left!＂ I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

Answer 1

【答案】

In the summer holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, once I started the car, my mind blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the , ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂ left!＂ I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.

【解析】

【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在暑假期间考驾照第一天发生的故事。

第一处：eighteen改为eighteenth 考查数词。句意：在我十八岁生日后的那个暑假。eighteen意思为＂十八，十八个＂，表示数量，eighteenth表示＂第十八个的＂，故将eighteen改为eighteenth。

第二处：first前加the/my 考查冠词。句意：我依然记得第一天是多么艰难。句中特指开始学驾照的第一天，所以在first前加上the。也可以加上my，my first day表示＂我（学驾照）的第一天＂，故在first前加the或my。

第三处：so改为but/yet 考查连词。根据句意可知作者本以为自己已经掌握了教练的话，结果一发动车，脑中一片空白，前后文为转折关系，故将so改为but或yet。

第四处：goes改为went 考查时态。根据前文中的started可知时态为一般过去时，故将goes改为went。

第五处：word改为words 考查单复数。句意：教练一直喊＂加速！＂＂减速！＂＂左转！＂。word＂单词，消息＂，words 可以表示为word的复数，也表示某人说的话，这里指教练说的那些话，故将word改为words。

第六处：Turning改为Turn 考查非谓语动词。分析语境可知教练的话＂加速＂，＂减速＂，＂左转＂都是祈使句，根据前文＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂也可以看得出来。祈使句应该用动词原形，故将Turning改为Turn。

第七处：much去掉 考查固定句型。句意：我如此紧张以至于无法分辨哪个方向是左。固定句型so...that…表示＂如此……以至于……＂，much为多余成分，故将much去掉。

第八处：late改为later 考查副词。late在此作副词，late＂迟地＂，later＂稍后、随后＂。此处表示＂几分钟之后＂，故将late改为later。

第九处：suddenly改为sudden 考查形容词。句意：我来了个紧急刹车。suddenly是副词，表示＂意外地，忽然地＂。sudden为形容词，表示＂突然的；迅速的＂，修饰名词stop用形容词，故将suddenly改为sudden。a sudden stop表示＂急刹车＂。

第十处：on改为of 考查介词。分析语境可知此处表示＂在路中间急刹车＂，on the road表示＂在路上＂，the middle of the road表示＂路的中央＂，强调的是＂the middle＂，故将on改为of。