Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays more and more Chinese go to work with bicycle, leaving their cars at home. Why are so many people riding bicycles to work? They have different reason for it.

First, bicycles do not use up any fuel. Therefore, they cost less than other means of transport. Besides, bicycles do not need many space on the road, and it is easily to find a place for them. And everybody knows that riding a bicycle is healthy sport.

When people drive their cars to work or shop, they lost the chance to exercise, but the waste gas from the cars will pollute the air. And moreover, people feel annoying when looking for a parking lot in te busy city center. So I prefer riding a bicycle to drive a car.

We are looking forward to a cleaner and better environment by changing our life style.

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays more and more Chinese go to work bicycle, leaving their cars at home. Why are so many people riding bicycles to work? They have different for it.

First, bicycles do not use up any fuel. Therefore, they cost less than other means of transport. Besides, bicycles do not need space on the road, and it is to find a place for them. And everybody knows that riding a bicycle is healthy sport.

When people drive their cars to work or shop, they the chance to exercise, the waste gas from the cars will pollute the air. And moreover, people feel when looking for a parking lot in the busy city center. So I prefer riding a bicycle to a car.

We are looking forward to a cleaner and better environment by changing our life style.

【解析】

【语篇解读】本文为议论文。讲述的是现在越来越多的人骑自行车去上班或购物的原因。

第一处：第一句话中的with 改为by。 考查介词。句意：现在越来越多的中国人骑自行车去上班，把轿车 留在家里。根据句意和后面的bicycle前无冠词可知此处应用介词by，构成“by+交通工具”结构，表示“乘 坐某种交通工具”。

第二处：第三句话中的reason 改为reasons。考查名词。根据different可知reason应用复数形式。

第三处：第二段第一句话中的up去掉。考查动词和动词短语。句意：首先，自行车不使用任何燃料。根据 句意可知此处表示“使用”而不是“用光”，故去掉up。

第四处：第二段第三句话中的many改为much。考查形容词。space为不可数名词，应用much修饰表示“许多”。

第五处：第二段第三句话中的easily 改为easy。考查副词。此处it为形式主语，真正主语为后面的不定式 短语to find a place for them，故应用形容词easy作表语。

第六处：第二段最后一句话中的healthy前加a。考查冠词。句意：每个人都知道骑自行车是一项健康的运 动。根据句意可知此处应用不定冠词a。

第七处：第三段第一句话中的lost改为lose。考查时态。句意：当人们开车去上班或购物时，他们失去了锻 的机会，而且汽车排出的废气会污染空气。根据句意可知此处应用一般现在时表示现在的客观事实， 故改为lose。

第八处：第三段第一句话中的but 改为and。考查连词。根据句意可知此处应用and表示并列。

第九处：第三段第二句话中的annoying改为annoyed。考查形容词。句意：另外，当人们在繁忙的市中心寻 找停车场时会感到很恼火。annoying令人恼怒的，令人恼火的；annoyed感到恼怒的，感到恼火的。根 据句意可知此处应用annoyed。

第十处：第三段最后一句话中的drive 改为driving。考查非谓语动词。句意：因此，与开车比起来，我更 喜欢骑自行车。根据句意结合prefer的用法可知此处应用driving构成prefer doing to doing（与……比 起来更喜欢……）结构。