Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I’d like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class, won the 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

Look forward to receiving your letter.

Answer 1

【答案】

I’d like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was on Oct. 6th, was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers it. Wang Lin, a student from my class, won the 100-metre race. He the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do best. Although I was not one of the , I was proud of we had done.

forward to receiving your letter.

【解析】

第一处：删除more 本句结构tell sb. sth. about sth.，根据语境，more 应删除。

第二处：holding→hold 结合语意此句应用被动结构，根据语境，holding应改为held。

第三处：it→which 根据语意此处应是一个非限制性定语从句，it改为which。

第四处：attend→attending 此处结构为there be somebody doing sth.,有某人做某事，attend改为attending。

第五处：finish→finished 结合语境此处应为过去时，finish 改为finished.

第六处：success前加a success为可数名词，意为＂一件成功的事＂，前应加a。

第七处：my→our 本句主语we，do my best应改为do our best。

第八处：winner→winners one of 后应用可数名词的复数形式，winner 改为winners。

第九处：that→what 介词of 后的宾语从句缺少宾语，that改为what。

第十处：Look→Looking 书信末Looking forward to receiving your latter是I’m looking forwarding to receiving your letter的省略，ook改为Looking。