Question

【题目】Correction 4（2016·新课标I卷）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

Answer 1

【答案】

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live. Though not very big, the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is . Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time. Instead, he hopes that business will grow .

【解析】

第一处：that→where。考查宾语从句。此处表达的是＂靠近我所居住的地方＂，故需将that改为where。where在此引导宾语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。

第二处：but去掉。考查连词。从属连词Though(虽然)不可与并列连词but(但是)一起使用，故需去掉but。

【归纳拓展】

在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用；连词because不和so连用；此外，return不和back连用。

第三处：had→have。考查时态。 整篇文章都是以现在时态写的， 所以需将一般过去时改为一般现在时。

第四处：honest→honesty。考查名词。根据语境＂我叔叔告诉我他成功的关键在于诚实＂可知，此处该用名词形式作表语。

第五处：or→and。考查并列连词。根据语境可知，此处不是表示选择关系，而是表示＂新鲜的蔬菜和优质的油＂，故把or改为and。

第六处：using→used。考查被动语态。fresh vegetables和high quality oil与use之间存在被动关系，故用被动语态。

第七处：becoming前加of。考查介词。dream of doing sth.是固定搭配，意为＂梦想做某事＂。

第八处：the→a。考查冠词。此处表示泛指，故该用不定冠词a，in a short period of time意为＂短期内＂。

第九处：our→his。考查代词。由语境及主语he可知，此处指的是叔叔的生意，故将our改为his才合乎语境。

第十处：steady→steadily。考查副词。修饰动词grow该用副词，所以应用steady的副词形式steadily。