Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I went out early today to attend the birthday party and after it was over, I went to a place when I often have lunch. Usually, I would take the bus home from there, or today I decided to walk home instead taking the bus. I want to get some exercise.

On my walk home, I saw a girl’s student ID card had been dropping by the bus stop. I decided to get home and try out to reach her online so I could return it to me as soon as possible. I sent her a message eager and made arrange to meet her to give it back to her.

Answer 1

【答案】

I went out early today to attend birthday party and after it was over, I went to a place I often have lunch. Usually, I would take the bus home from there, today I decided to walk home instead taking the bus. I to get some exercise.

On my walk home, I saw a girl’s student ID card had been by the bus stop. I decided to get home and try to reach her online so I could return it to as soon as possible. I sent her a message and made to meet her to give it back to her.

【解析】第一处：此处指“去参加一场生日聚会”，并非特指。故填the改为a。

第二处：本句运用了定语从句，先行词是指地点的名词；分析从句可知，引导词在从句中作地点状语。故when改为where。

第三处：前后是句意的转折，而非选择。故or改为but。

第四处：instead是副词，作状语；而instead of后面才可以跟名词、代词、动名词。此处指“步行而不是乘车”。故instead后面加of。

第五处：通读可知，文章讲述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时态。故want改为wanted。

第六处：分析句意可知，ID card与drop之间是被动关系，本句运用了过去完成时的被动语态。故dropping改为dropped。

第七处：此处指“尽力和她取得联系”。try out是“试验；考验”的意思，要用try to do…结构。故去掉out。

第八处：此处指“把身份证归还给那个女孩”。故me改为her。

第九处：修饰谓语动词用副词。故eager改为eagerly。

第十处：made arrangements是固定搭配，指“做好安排”，在动词后面跟名词。故arrange改为arrangements。