Question

【题目】请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。

One day, a poor boy who was selling goods door to door to pay for school was hungry. So he decided to beg for a meal at the next house. A young woman opened the door. Instead of a meal, he asked for a drink of water. However, she brought him a large glass of milk．

Years later the young woman got ill, so her family sent her to hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to study her rare disease．Dr Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in for the consultation. When he went in to see her, He recognized her at once. He was determined to do his best to save her life.

After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr Kelly looked at the bill and wrote something on the side, and then it was sent to her room. She was afraid to open it because she was positive that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off．Finally she looked, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention．She read these words: “Paid in full with a glass of milk.”

[写作内容]

1. 用约30 个单词概括上文的主要内容；

2. 用约120 个单词就“帮助别人就是帮助自己”这一话题发表自己的看法，内容包括：

(1)文中主人公是如何诠释这一道理的；

(2)举例说明这个道理；

(3)如果以后碰到需要帮助的人，你将如何做。

[写作要求]

1. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dr. Kelly did his utmost to save a young woman’s life and paid the expensive bill only because the young woman once offered him a glass of milk when he was hungry and thirsty.

After reading the passage, I was deeply lost in thought. If the young woman hadn’t given that poor boy a glass of milk, she might not have been saved and been able to pay the bill. As a result, when we happen to meet someone who needs help, we should give him or her a hand. Helping others will benefit ourselves.

I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Senior One. Li Ping, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was always explaining them to him patiently. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, surprisingly, I found my English improved too.

Helping others is also helping ourselves. In my future life, as long as I came across someone in trouble, I will make every effort to help him or her out. Only if everyone can act like this will the world become more an more beautiful.

【解析】这篇范文概括部分简洁明了，短短33个词概括了故事内容。表达观点部分能紧扣“帮助别人就是帮助自己”这一话题来写，所用例子来源于日常生活，并且使用主题句加上支撑句表达。此外，文中使用了较好的词汇和句型，如“be lost in thought；came across ；make every effort to do sth.；might have done；Helping others will benefit ourselves（动名词作主语）；Only if everyone can act like this will the world become more an more beautiful（倒装句）…”。