Question

最近，我们以“2012年中学生的春节活动”为题，在368名中学生中进行了一次调查（survey）。以下是调查数据：

【写作内容】
请根据以上内容用英语写一份调查报告。内容包括：
1.调查问题及调查对象；
2.主要活动；
3.感受及原因；
4.期望。
【写作要求】
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Answer 1

Recently we surveyed 368 middle school students on how they spent the 2012 Spring Festival. 30% said they spent most of their time with their parents visiting relatives and friends while 25% went traveling with classmates or parents. 45% of all those surveyed indicated that they just stayed at home to do homework. When asked how they felt about the Spring Festival, most said they enjoyed it because of the holiday and lucky money they got, but some felt unhappy because the amount of homework they were given left little time for fun activities. Many students expressed the hope that next year they will have less homework and more free time.

写作前首先要看清楚要求，题目要求写“2012年中学生的春节活动”的调查,信息有饼状图表和文字说明，而且内容包括: 1.调查问题及调查对象；2.主要活动；3.感受及原因；4.期望，首先要会看图表，这是一个饼状图表，主要显示的是不同的活动比例，写作时要交代清楚，题目要求只能写五句话，因此在写文章时一定会遇到长的句子，一定需要把握长句的能力，掌握主从句的灵活运用。例如第一句话中的how they spent the 2012 Spring Festival.是宾语从句。第二句话的复合结构with their parents visiting relatives and friends和while 25% went traveling with classmates or parents.。第三句话的45% of all those surveyed 这里surveyed作定语修饰those。第四句话最长，使用了When asked how they felt about the Spring Festival,状语从句的省略式，because of the holiday and lucky money they got,这里面包含了定语从句，because the amount of homework they were given left little time for fun activities.在这个原因状语从句中也有定语从句。最后一句话里Many students expressed the hope that next year they will have less homework and more free time.that引导的就是同位语从句。有这些精彩的句子组合的文章才能出彩。